tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post2345956030876182357..comments2023-11-05T03:49:34.614-08:00Comments on Lost Kite: someone new already leavinghollyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06973648530219556353noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-30904088086412713712008-09-21T11:00:00.000-07:002008-09-21T11:00:00.000-07:00Thank you Slynne for visiting! I will be in touch...Thank you Slynne for visiting! I will be in touch. <BR/><BR/>Also, Julie, thank you as always, you are such a wonderful reader. Yes, some sadness.hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973648530219556353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-89429403631648305602008-09-21T10:54:00.000-07:002008-09-21T10:54:00.000-07:00Hey, Holly! Beautiful poem. I love it all, espec...Hey, Holly! Beautiful poem. I love it all, especially the "teeth grinding" stanza and the question that says so much. It's very lovely and with a tinge of sadness. I love how you do it without being overly dramatic, too. <BR/><BR/>Wonderful work as always:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-25931671089027749492008-09-21T07:49:00.000-07:002008-09-21T07:49:00.000-07:00Holly, this was really lovely. I love the ending ...Holly, this was really lovely. I love the ending especially, and the detail about waking up throughout the night. Oh, familiarity!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-35380555478672872602008-09-21T06:24:00.000-07:002008-09-21T06:24:00.000-07:00Oh thank you Paisley...what kind words!Oh thank you Paisley...what kind words!hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973648530219556353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-6176514682641691152008-09-21T04:55:00.000-07:002008-09-21T04:55:00.000-07:00i am always ever so much more drawn to what i beli...i am always ever so much more drawn to what i believe to be "confessional" poetry than i am a mere string of words that sound lovely together and end up empty on my soul...<BR/><BR/>this was definitely a piece that wrapped it's arms around me and drew me in... bravo!!paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.com