tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post25832746154806451..comments2023-11-05T03:49:34.614-08:00Comments on Lost Kite: the backhollyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06973648530219556353noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-73067053229166230332008-09-01T18:14:00.000-07:002008-09-01T18:14:00.000-07:00What a neat write=brain stem connected to those ol...What a neat write=<BR/><BR/>brain stem connected to those old bones<BR/>(all the flavor boiled out) <BR/><BR/>back bend or side twist or toe touch<BR/>something has to change <BR/><BR/><BR/>Something has to change this to me is a powerful line that says all for this poem... Wonderful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-45435167623991517132008-09-01T07:13:00.000-07:002008-09-01T07:13:00.000-07:00Such a sense of tight tension. The end, with its m...Such a sense of tight tension. The end, with its movement, is such a relief.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-83934922571450197042008-08-31T18:28:00.000-07:002008-08-31T18:28:00.000-07:00thank you Cynthia...I realized after writing this ...thank you Cynthia...I realized after writing this I need a massage. ;)hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973648530219556353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-18633265571249035142008-08-31T16:43:00.000-07:002008-08-31T16:43:00.000-07:00Oh, the load we pile upon ourselves, how we try to...Oh, the load we pile upon ourselves, how we try to "lift",<BR/>so many burdens, and I love<BR/>"chainmail thoughts"! true this,<BR/>"a heart thrust into the neck",<BR/>knotted mess.<BR/>Excellent poem, Holly!Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10598169309616545734noreply@blogger.com