tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post4609453765500039269..comments2023-11-05T03:49:34.614-08:00Comments on Lost Kite: peach standhollyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06973648530219556353noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-39190887098874907222008-08-17T06:59:00.000-07:002008-08-17T06:59:00.000-07:00Thank you Julie, as always, and you know, this was...Thank you Julie, as always, and you know, this was just an everyday event...something that happened to me the other day...sometimes those make the best poems, I guess. <BR/><BR/>Crafty...Interesting you commented because I actually thought of you when perusing your site after I had posted this poem! Glad you like it.hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973648530219556353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-70244150127895249782008-08-17T05:15:00.000-07:002008-08-17T05:15:00.000-07:00This is an excellent comment on local food and the...This is an excellent comment on local food and the need to stand up against the power of supermarkets. It also made me want to eat a peach .....Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6907443983750294322.post-44518962401103447342008-08-16T13:28:00.000-07:002008-08-16T13:28:00.000-07:00Holly, you know I would love this one. And now......Holly, you know I would love this one. And now...seriously...I'm not just saying this to be nice...it is my FAVORITE poem of yours! I know I've said that about other poems of yours, but damn...this is good. Of course, I guess I'm looking at it from a selfish point of view, because I can relate to the farmers and the "little" guys. <BR/><BR/>But this poem SAYS so much, and it says it so beautifully. The imperfect peaches...ah. So true. And ending with the juice from that "imperfect" peach running down your face is a powerful kick. Your lines sing. So beautiful. And many good details and sense of place. I hope you send it out, because it should be published!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com