(after watching Top Hat)
slide, scritch sand, soar
tap, pat, stomp
glide
movements more seamless
than the modern panty
feathers from her dress
cascade, float and fall gently
onto the dance floor
she falls like a dolly
backwards over his arm
he woos her with only his bouyant feet
and his liquid voice
she easily falls into step with him
leaping, a peek into her flying skirt
yet it's still him chasing her
4 comments:
I like this. It has a great narrative flow about it. Nice work.
Jarod, I like your style (read some of your work)...thanks for dropping by...please come back and read again.
Wonderful beginning -- love the sound of it, the movement.
ok, I'm gonna comment on my own poem:
'Holly, I think "movements more seamless/ than the modern panty" is hilarious!'
(I can be so narcissistic and nerdy!)
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