twisted bronchi, tweaked with smoke
from yesterday's yard fire
(we love to burn things in the yard)
as though there are no neighbors
to smell the stench of yard-trash
and soak it into lungs
alveoli wretched, gory gray,
not pink with the oxygen
of prayer
lungs like hands folded in our
chest cringing from
exposure to the living earth
so we consume, and burn
and lungs grow weary
and tighten
rib cage and sternum,
are protection from chest blows
not from
when
the wind blows
7 comments:
The sounds in the first line of this just dance. This brings back the awful stench when my dad burned garbage in the yard. Fumes of burning plastic that it hurt to breathe. And those last lines...A wonderful poem.
You are oh-so-kind, Nathan...I think we too have a mutual admiration society going on...like I have with Julie! We should all collaborate on a poem!
Oh, and Scot too!
There's nothing wrong with some admiration when it real. And besides, mutual admiration is the best kind. I'll collaborate on something. (or were you joking?)
I was certainly not joking!! HOW FUN! I love that kind of stuff!
painful and powerful words,,
Thanks for visiting, Crafty...hope you come back...I enjoyed visiting your site, and will return!
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