Saturday, February 7, 2009

an American Sentence

In my dreams, I can fly, but my teeth are rotting out.

9 comments:

Rethabile said...

I like.

Beryl Singleton Bissell said...

What wonderful contrast. Hit me like a blow to the chest.

holly said...

Thank you so much Rethabile and Beryl!

Noah the Great said...

This strikes my mind.

christine said...

The Lord giveth, and the Lord taketh away.

Hey, congrats, your poems are up at Asphalt. Good work. It was wonderful to meet you in person last night. I'm going to blog about it tomorrow.

holly said...

awww....!

Misty said...

wow such a strong powerful line I like it...

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