caught up in crap
and particles and
vomit
I unfurl unleash unbutton
unzip undo
miscellaneous vices
(love sex too much,
don't want to be ignored)
keep me tied, fettered
to the floor
there are factory parts,
(my toes and my elbows
get in the way)
and it's hard to get
out of so much packaging
but it's too bad the sky
won't open up
and swallow you
5 comments:
"I unfurl unleash unbutton
unzip undo"
Lovely music in that line.
wow it's too bad the sky won't open up and swallow you! neat words
love the part about how hard it is to get out of packaging. brilliant
I must be losing my mind. I know I read this one, but I didn't comment. Maybe I told the voices in my head...ha! ha!
Anyway, I agree with Gerry and floreta. It is brilliant. The ending is perfect, too. It makes me want to kick the "you" in the poem, even though I don't know who the "you" is. I love it when words move me that way. Very powerful.
And Misty. I meant to say I agree with everyone. See? I'm losing it. But it's a wonderful poem.
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