kick to the chest
blah blah written in
stone on his grave
they buried him in a
sleeping bag
stuck him in the dirt
when he was alive
he drank warm whiskey-
a shot before every
road-trip
honkytonk
bars on his breath
wild women gathered
around his handsome lips
he cracked open
hearts all over the place
till finally
he pissed off the wrong barmaid
6 comments:
haha...very entertaining!
well, you surprised me with that entertaining piece, and it kept my attention. good work.
rofl
You've gotta love that one :D
Great poem Holly. A good example of how we reap what we sow. Scary piece. Reminds me of a David Lynch movie.
bang outstanding ending!
Awesome work, Holly. Freaking awesome to the nth degree!! I love the story and the voice. The ending is perfect. The use of language is great. I love it!!
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