Monday, July 7, 2008

got back my computer!

I was without for a week, going to the library when I could, but now I have it back...made me realize how addicted I am.
This poem is from the other day...untitled...

I saw a silvery
balloon this morning
in the sky.

It was floating,
following the breeze,
aimless, light,
lofty, calm.

I wanted to be that balloon.

1 comment:

Maya said...

I read all your poems till here, and though I liked the imagery and your choice of words, I felt all of them could do with some work...
This however, was perfect... :)
What a beautiful feeling!!!

I also wanted to know whether you'd like to exchange links.. let me know!
-Ayesha.